To finish our script we had to add a line to the transcript that we decided to add to the final film. We also had to change some of our lines that we decided to change to make it more appropriate and flowing. This is our final transcript.
Final Edited transcript.
EXT. Zack’s house- Day
Shot of outside of the house--- phone ringing
Dissolve to:
Zack’s bedroom,*Phone rings, Zack waking up to the phone ringing
ZACK, *Picks up phone, ““Hello? Oh hey Mr. White. Wait what? Fired! How are you going to do this to me I can barely make ends meet now”*Slams phone down
Walks out of bedroom and out of the house *camera follows
Outside of Zack’s house- day
ZACK.*, “What is this?, *Looks and grabs the eviction notice, “How can this day get any worse” Shot of the evection notice
ZACK. Turns around and Walks over to the car, *Shoot this
ZACK. Walks in the car, car doesn’t start “shoot!” *Shot outside of the car
ZACK. "Hey man can you pick me up and take me to Publix? Ok thanks"
INT. Josh’s Car Outside of Zack’s House- day
ZACK. “Thanks man” *Camera from the corner of the door showing both characters
JOSH. “Ya anytime” *Insert handshake
ZACK. “See ya”
EXT. OUTSIDE OF PUBLIX
ZACK. Inside store buying scratch off ticket out of machine
ZACK. Walks out of the store with a bag
ZACK. Takes card out of the bag
ZACK. Scratches the card “Show me the money”
ZACK. Drop to his knees…
CUT SCENE
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